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Beautiful! The colours you've chosen are perfect, and I adore the way you've sort of semi-lined it and how it's darker around some edges to pick out details - it adds a lot of solidity and depth. The background is wonderful and the atmosphere is lovely too, and the lighting works really well : > The textures are fantastic, as always!

The anatomy is mainly good (I am loving those hands), but be careful with the breasts. Boobs aren't balloon shaped - they tend to be flatter at the top and rounder underneath due to epic laws of gravity and stuff. Otherwise, they look fake and inflated, and no-one likes fake boobs D: Also, I think they would look better if they were squeezed together less - contrary to popular belief, boobs do not press together unless you are wearing a cleavage enhancing bra : < Also, even more sadly, Amazon women tended to have er...only one breast 8D But, i won't take the title that literally xD
I think, other than that, the anatomy is fine : >

Also, the pose is a little static - it may have been nice to make her hair and skirt blow around a bit and maybe add some swirling leaves, just to add a bit of energy.

I love her intense stare, though - those eyes are wonderful! You've improved so much over just the past couple of months, all your hard work has really, really paid off!!
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Thanks so much, Doz! 8D

Glad you like the colors, linelessness, and atmosphere; 'cause that's all I can take credit for. xD

The lineart was actually scanned from Matt Dixon's book, so I can't take credit for the good hands. But on the other hand the incorrect boobage isn't my fault! XD

Though uh.... "Amazon women tended to have er...only one breast"
wut? XD

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Anyway.

Yeah, in mythology the Amazons cut off their right breasts to make it easier to use a bow or throw spears without an obstruction D8

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